Wednesday, May 09, 2012

Soda Pop

Is this a new brand of soda, I mean the carbonated type for drinking? It is packaged like a 1.5L drink you would commonly see on supermarket shelves.

But it isn't. It is washing or cleaning soda. I am concerned. What if a child drank it, not realising that it isn't what he thinks it is.

Monday, May 07, 2012


Why not just write "Suffered from" instead of "Ex-sufferer of". It goes well with the next sentence. Maybe the people at this hair restoration place (or the copywriter whom they engaged) could also do with some language restoration?